aside from the creepy semi-transparentness, this is is improved over the last one. The character's acting is good in terms of posing, but the actions are a bit querky and the holds look stiff. the timing if the lip sync is good, and so are some mouth positions. but with the way the actor is talking you could really emphasize the "R" shapes. I'm just not feeling the R's in 'brilliant' and 'scary'. Otherwise, nice work!
I agree with roman it's been getting better at every step and that the poses are quite stiff. It's a little hard to see the lips with your new poses and that makes it hard to know if you sync'd it up properly. But it does look pretty good. 70/100
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aside from the creepy semi-transparentness, this is is improved over the last one. The character's acting is good in terms of posing, but the actions are a bit querky and the holds look stiff. the timing if the lip sync is good, and so are some mouth positions. but with the way the actor is talking you could really emphasize the "R" shapes. I'm just not feeling the R's in 'brilliant' and 'scary'. Otherwise, nice work!
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I agree with roman it's been getting better at every step and that the poses are quite stiff. It's a little hard to see the lips with your new poses and that makes it hard to know if you sync'd it up properly. But it does look pretty good. 70/100
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